I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Sunday, March 29, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Kaela, it's great that you've blogged some writing that you've been doing. You have lots of personal voice in your writing like you're in the story you've written. Next time, maybe screenshot your writing instead of embedding it in like you've done so that it's easier to read.
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OK thank you! i will work on it next time i write something.Hope your having a good holiday.Miss you and other teachers
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