I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, August 12, 2019
disgusting dinner by kaela
Past the couple of days we had two chooses out of disgusting dinner and If I was on the moon I choose the disgusting dinner so we had to do a moment in time about what you choose If you don't no what a moment in time is it is were you pertained you are on the moon or you are at the table waiting for your dinner so like its like your there right now here is mine hope you like it.😃😈😁
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Hey Kaela it's Destiny here,
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you did yay with capital letters and plus YAY is bold.